@sagax
i agree with cantor but i have some more things
1. ur acu walks at the beginning not so important but annoying
2. u wasted much mass
3. protect ur expanding engies(only possible trough more land facs^^)
4. dont build so much t1 mobile aa and t2 MML
5. u should use the adjency bonus for ur land facs
6. reclaime more, especially the stones near the hill u start
7. more Scouting, Radars, mobile scouts(especially for aurora range)
8. rebuild ur expansions faster
just copy some buildorders from top players, example RA_ZLO, Voodoo, BC_Blackheart etc.