MY Story of Faf on Gw

[SupremeBurger]

As the dust settled and the sound of metal grinding upon each other The 4 commanders planned their strategy against the opposition who was one step ahead of them.

As the 4 commanders decided to focus 1 side a fellow commander sent in transports laden with units as the 4 commanders realized what happened they turned to run but before their slow metallic suit could turn around a large ball of plasma streaked across the sky and then there was nothing but the sound of a nuclear bomb going off in the distance and the stopping of coms to the other side of the planet.

As the 2 other commanders realized what happened they pushed harder and harder looking for the enemy for their revenge.

Then they saw him walking around shooting everything in sight.
The sight of the aliens filled them with power as they charged him. Before the Alien commander realized what had happened they had him surrounded he let out one last order to his fellow comrades’ and was nothing but a cloud of smoke curling into the sky.

With this victory the commanders pushed harder and harder when one of the commanders across the planet was within sight distance with a broken transmitter. Being hunted down but a pack of tanks and a commander.

They knew that their new recruit was doomed and they left him to die surrounded and alone as they gated out they saw the end of Private Zach surrounded outnumbered and fighting for what he believed in when they were safely back at base they told the Generals what had happened and the slaughter of their new recruits who had Aced there combat test but were over runed in the end.




-SupremeBurger

[SupremeBurger]

As the dust settled and the sound of metal grinding upon each other The 4 commanders planned their strategy against the opposition who was one step ahead of them.

As the four UEF commanders decided to focus one side a fellow alien commander sent in transports laden with units as the four UEF commanders realized what happened they turned to run but before their slow metallic suit could turn around a large ball of plasma streaked across the sky and then there was nothing but the sound of a nuclear bomb going off in the distance and the complete silenced that followed.

As the two UEF other commanders realized what happened they pushed harder and harder looking for the enemy for their revenge.
Then they saw him A Overconfident fool whose tanks had all died walking around shooting everything in sight.

The sight of the alien filled them with power as they charged him. Before the Alien commander realized what had happened they had him surrounded he let out one last order to his fellow comrades’ to stand and fight Absolute shock ran through the remaining alien commanders as there was nothing but a cloud of smoke curling into the sky.

With this victory the UEF commanders pushed harder and harder when one of the commanders across the planet had appeared smoking and trying to make it back to the safety of his allies trying to send a beacon for his fellows to rescue him but they knew he was dead and with nothing more than a glance they left him to die alone and afraid with nothing but death before him.

Zach knew that they had abandoned him to not risk themselves and knew what cowards they were to leave a fellow solider behind a issued a self-destruct command to his Built In Nuclear power generator he took one look at the aliens closing in on him from all sides thirsty for blood he gave one final wish and threw himself into them shooting everything within range as his Suit was dying he looked one of the aliens right in the eyes as he commander self-destructed he would never forget that his fellow comrades left him here alone and dying on a cold alien infested planet never would he forget never.

As the aliens watched him explode they knew that they had won but one of them their lowest rank with them felt sad for the UEF commander dying for his cause even though he was abandoned left to die by his comrades.

Since that day he has vowed to kill every last UEF alive until he put the young UEF Commander’s soul at rest until that day though he would fight and kill everyone in his path never would he be stopped for what made him win wasn’t strategy’s or numbers but honor, honor to finish what he started for the young UEF commander.

This is the story of what happened on planet number 4


-SupremeBurger (Low ranking seraphim)
-speed2/joly (high ranking seraphim)
-Gyle (low ranking uef left to die)
-All other members of the fight


War is fought for many reasons but let people know that this one isn’t fought in the name of god but in the name of revenge and honor for fallen soldiers

[theManfet]

Can I have a replay? Because I don't really understand your Story....

[SupremeBurger]

Ok i think this is how you post a replay

[Ze_PilOt]

Very nice initiative, but I think you should format your text in paragraph for making it easier to read (I took the liberty to edit your post to do so).

Some paragraphs are a single sentence without any punctuation, you should split them too

[SupremeBurger]

I know i typed this last night in under 10 minuets
i wasnt really thinking of grammar and puncutation
thanks anyway

[Swkoll]

You left Gyle out to die too? *high fives SupremeBurger*